Thursday, February 14, 2008

Real world grammar examples

When I look at the Souper Salad ad, I see a desire to educate, but I find it difficult to see why they are doing this. Maybe they feel that if they can educate you, they will be able to get you to come in and eat. As a potential customer though, I'm not even sure they have crab, tuna, or fish. I can assume they have shrimp, but I'm not sure that I want to be pink like a flamingo. The bad grammar isn't as easy to locate, because it seems they took the facts from a couple of websites without changing the grammar to fit the ad. This ad did nothing to make me want to eat there, but kind of pushed me away with the facts.

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